Everyone wants to see résumé samples on a professional writing website. Yet career history is as individual as a fingerprint. While there are similarities in what we do, our gifts, talents, accomplishments, and professional stories are uniquely our own. Capturing that individuality in a résumé is somewhat like the difference between a novice and veteran fisherman going after a big catch. What we say—and how we translate that individuality into compelling snapshots of the best a person brings to a chosen field—is an art form. Most of us are gifted at doing our jobs. Few are equally gifted at articulating how we do them.
Rather than show numerous résumé samples, I would like to provide a few before and after snapshots of how expanding content and restructuring writing can create marketing impact and illuminate a client’s capabilities and accomplishments.
Before and After Snapshot
Nadine works with her clients to describe their accomplishments in clear, concrete, and tangible terms. Asking the right questions and skillfully integrating cause-and-effect writing with proactive verbs, language, and keywords has consistently delighted and advantaged her clients.
Here’s a segment of a résumé Nadine rewrote after interviewing her client and more aggressively defining his professional accomplishments.
Before
National Sales Manager
- Recognized for leadership and outstanding performance; groomed for increased responsibilities.
- Provide leadership for sales force of 15+ and service/business support staff in a commercial division.
- Assigned to major responsibilities in marketing, production, coordination, and profitability.
- Develop and maintain budgets; responsible for forecasts involving shipments, tooling and production.
- Direct involvement with national and major chain accounts; corporate contacts in wide industry range.
- Responsible for smoothly run operations and accountability.
After
National Sales Manager
- Recruited, directed, and motivated Commercial Division Team, collaboratively pioneered new product development initiatives, and successfully introduced three new product lines.
- Effectively managed profit and loss accountability and orchestrated multiple projects ranging from $500,000 to $1-million.
- Managed development, production, and service operation and delivered $85 million in anaerobic business line.
- Successfully drove new product launches within targeted time and budget constraints.
- Implemented quality improvements, reduced customer returns by 50%, and averted $500,000 annual sales loss.
- Developed/maintained international vendor relationships, negotiated competitive contracts, and successfully reduced production costs without compromising quality or delivery schedules.
- Conducted competitive market analysis and defined/established strategic product features, benefits, and price points.
- Prepared/presented business plans to Senior Operating Committee and VP Marketing Teams.
The following resume was prepared for Jonn by a well-established career counseling organization.
Frustrated by the lack of results after a substantial investment, John contacted Nadine. After interviewing Jonn, she brought a much deeper dimension to his accomplishments and education. Jonn subsequently secured a new position and Nadine received the thanks of a grateful client and many subsequent referrals.
Not pleased with his results, John came to Nadine for a second preparation.

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